St patrick

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Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

One day there was a man called St Patrick. His family was really rich. He loved going to the beach but he hated school.But when he was at the beach he saw a big ship.So he froze like a stachue. The pirates stoal  him and took St Patrick to Irland. He got sold to a man that needed to look after the sheep and the pigs. So he looked after them. Then god said there's a ship waiting for you. So he went off.A person pulled down a rope to St Patrick then he got the rope then they got out of Irland. Then a    big storm was aproching. The ship grounded in France. when they got to France they where starving. St Patrick asked god for some food. Then all of a sudden god sent them pigs and an apple tree. For dinner they had pork and apple sauce.