St patrick

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Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

One day there was a man called St Patrick. His family was really rich. He loved going to the beach but he hated school.But when he was at the beach he saw a big ship.So he froze like a stachue. The pirates stoal  him and took St Patrick to Irland. He got sold to a man that needed to look after the sheep and the pigs. So he looked after them. Then god said there's a ship waiting for you. So he went off.A person pulled down a rope to St Patrick then he got the rope then they got out of Irland. Then a    big storm was aproching. The ship grounded in France. when they got to France they where starving. St Patrick asked god for some food. Then all of a sudden god sent them pigs and an apple tree. For dinner they had pork and apple sauce.

Swimming Sports

At swimming sports, I was so excited to go to the swimming pool. When I got there, I was hungry but I left my bag with my lunch in the changing rooms so I had to get it. When it was the 7 and 8's turn, I hopped into the pool, ready to go.
"On your marks, get set, go!"
We raced to the other side. I came no place. I came 3rd place in the 2nd race. In the last race, I came 3rd again. Yay! I came 3rd in 2 races.

The Rocket

"It was a sunny day. It was the last day of swimming lessons so Ashley brought a rubbery rocket. It was bright red and blue. It felt rubbery like a bouncy rubber floating on the water. I was floating in the water with my life jacket when I slipped into the water. "Go Caleb! Go Caleb! everyone shouted."  The 2nd time I had my turn, I slid into the water then I floated in the water. At the end, we got to have free time, then we hopped out of the pool and walked to get changed.

World of Maths

Thump! Thump! Thump! as we came into the grand school hall. "Hello, Kath!" we said. First, Kath told us some instrucions, then we played some games. First, we played, 'Build a Bridge.' After we played Build a Bridge, we played, 'Where's Katie?' We had to look for a red door and, in the red door, was Katie, then Kath said to come and sit on the floor so we did, then it was time to come out of the grand school hall.

Swimming

"Come on the side of the pool," Ashley said, so we went soundlessly to sit on the slippery side of the pool. Splash! all of us sprung into the water. Next, Ashley said to call out our names, so we called our names out. When we got into the pool, it was freezing cold. Next, Ashley said to go around the sparkly water, so we followed the instructions then we had to go back to the wall.It was then time to do rocket arms. We had to swim to the other side of the pool. It was bubbling, "Blub, blub, blub." Finally, we had to get out of the pool.Wow! That was the first lesson I ever done.